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Post by fabmsm on Mar 10, 2015 7:43:31 GMT -5
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 10, 2015 22:39:41 GMT -5
nice start. enjoying the passion between bo and nora. blake is a person of interest.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 11, 2015 7:41:08 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 11, 2015 10:26:03 GMT -5
Nice chapter. True bo and nora, someone showing up, when trying to be alone. Please continue.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 12, 2015 7:45:25 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 12, 2015 15:49:11 GMT -5
One can feel the love bo and nora have for each other. They are concern for others, but not neglecting each other.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 13, 2015 7:33:29 GMT -5
Chapter 4 up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 13, 2015 12:49:27 GMT -5
Too cute! Always good to have Hank on board. Not sure about Blake just yet. There's a mystery with him. Please continue soon!
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 14, 2015 19:06:01 GMT -5
Chapter 5 up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 14, 2015 19:20:18 GMT -5
nice update. interupted again! will bo and nora ever get to spend some down time together? there is still something about blake that does not add up for me. looking forward to your next update. great job.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 15, 2015 11:06:05 GMT -5
Chapter 6 is up.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 16, 2015 7:26:14 GMT -5
Chapter 7 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 16, 2015 20:49:17 GMT -5
chapters 6 & 7 were great. heart breaking, yet so full of love. them both crying brought tears to my eyes. hanging out with viki and hank will help, but i am not so sure about blake. looking forward to see how you will bring this all together.
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Post by fabmsm on Mar 17, 2015 7:07:20 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Mar 17, 2015 23:13:45 GMT -5
not feeling good about what could happen next. hmmmmmmmmmmm. great chapter. please continue soon.
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