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Post by fabmsm on Feb 13, 2014 12:27:55 GMT -5
I am starting to post a new fanfic to my blog fabmsmff.blogspot.com Chapter 1 of Retaliation Amiss is posted. |
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 13, 2014 14:13:42 GMT -5
you are off to a great start! looking forward to the next chapter!
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 14, 2014 18:18:14 GMT -5
Chapter 2 up!
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 15, 2014 9:37:50 GMT -5
Chapter 3 up.
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 15, 2014 21:11:05 GMT -5
just read chapters 2&3. great job. thanks for not going into detail with regards to nora sleeping with sam. a bit of a mystery as to why she feels sick. i just hope she tells bo, before too long. with georgie already dead i look forward to your take on this storyline!
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 16, 2014 19:38:08 GMT -5
Chapter 4 up.
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 16, 2014 20:15:30 GMT -5
just read chapter 4. great job. i like how hank provided the proof. yet, i hate that nora actually slept with sam because she was hurt. now bo has walked away. so sad this ever happened. looking forward to your next chapter!
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 17, 2014 10:24:54 GMT -5
Chapter 5 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 17, 2014 23:56:53 GMT -5
chapter 5 was really great. i sense something up with sam. never trusted him. both nora and bo are hurting so bad. bo being so civil and quite is scary. poor nora! hate seeing her so upset. please continue soon!
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 18, 2014 19:31:56 GMT -5
Chapter 6 up.
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 19, 2014 20:22:49 GMT -5
Chapter 7 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 19, 2014 21:17:08 GMT -5
just read chapters 6 & 7. great updates. what a cliffhanger. the outcome can go either way. question is will bo stick around. i still think there is something up with sam. please continue soon.
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 20, 2014 12:26:22 GMT -5
Chapter 8 is up.
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Post by bn14ever on Feb 20, 2014 18:35:45 GMT -5
Great chapter 8. You are doing an awesome job with this story. I like that bo is thinking things out before reacting and thst they are both admitting how they feel from the start.
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Post by fabmsm on Feb 21, 2014 15:53:13 GMT -5
Chapter 9 up.
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